The Red Ocean

January 20, 2011
By Joel1 PLATINUM, Millbury, Massachusetts
Joel1 PLATINUM, Millbury, Massachusetts
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If we do not learn from the past then history is doomed to repeat itself...Or, for now we see through a glass darkly

This emotional pain
Stabbing like a knife
Bringing me to feign
Bleeding through its strife

Falling to the floor
Slothing in my red pool
Thinking on how I was more
Looking back I think

What a fool
In my sea I sink
Drowning like an infant
In his deserving bathe

Pathetic is he
Swimming in his sea
Outcast by the outside
With nothing but the friends

He had alongside
Starting to gargle
CH-choking on himself
The world to marvel

Astonished they are
As they point and laugh
Him drowning downward
In his red bathe

A hand leaps out
From amongst the world
Into his ocean
Saving him, from the worlds commotion

Laying there on another
Ch…Ch…Choking on his wound
He looks aside
To find his lover

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