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A large imperfection,
Rotting away in the ground.
Basically a crater where everyone is amazed by it’s beauty.
I find no excitement in it. Just a waste of time and money,
But it’s a national treasure, so they obviously did something right.
It’s really a hazard site.
Notice how we just brush off the fact that deaths occur there way too often.
I wonder what would happen when we reach an epidemic.
Let’s ignore that, also!
Well, keep ooh-ing and ah-ing at this death trap.
Maybe someday you’ll understand what I mean.
Gift shop, anyone?





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Alfilisara This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 9:30 am
That's awsome. I was not expecting the twist of being in a gift shop at the Grand Canyon. I thought it was purely about how the Grand Canyon was a large hole in the ground. You did really great with this one!
 
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