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To say that I'm so smart,
I've done some pretty stupid things
like falling for you when I don't even know you is pretty foolish
to have my life all figured out
and have it rocked by the lies you say
is pretty foolish
oh how silly me to believe in all the things you say is pretty foolish
welp I guess I've learned my lesson...
to not believe in everything you tell me
cause then I'll be pretty foolish




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today at 6:27 pm:
Its good, but it'd be better if there was more flow and rythmn to keep it going.  Just some feed back. 
 
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