Dear snow, i begged you to go

December 16, 2010
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Oh snow
Why must you flow
Into flakes of death traps on the floor below

You laugh as I fall
Turning my pink scarf into a white dull
Exploding my finger tips into numb icicles

I drip down into the door
Onto my now slippery wet floor
Because of you I am cold and sore

Yet you don’t shed a tear
But you should begin to fear
For the sun will rise and your death is near





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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 6:13 pm
Interesting :) I like how it was composed.
 
HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 10:34 am
very cute, like it a lot.  images are good.  nice job!
 
GraceK said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 9:56 am
Hahahaha this is cute!!!I love it so much ahahahah it's funny and yet truthful and valid!I love it.....and I too would want the snow to go,right now.Iam African and not used to it,too cold!!
 
Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 7:21 am

Quite wonderful! I love your work and see, know the image you try to grasp! Sadly, I never experienced snow... being down in the south. Sucks =/

But keep up your work.

If I may ask a small favor. You will check out some of my posted poems and stories. Rate/comment it doesn't matter. Thank yew.

 
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