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The World of Nature

Mountains and skies are like dreams in your eyes,
They disappear like a thousand lullabies
A song that can sing you to sleep
Is so gentle that it does not creep,
Does not wake you or never plays with you
The stars and the moon are like the clouds and the sun
They’re always there,
Looking down at the people who care,
The world of nature should not be unfaded
For I love and care for the universe and everything god has created
Therefore, he has made the world unique for reasons that haven’t even been discovered.
The world is tending to unfold,
The rain is starting to fall,
Everything is coming clean and I hope the universe does not fall!
Mountains and skies,
Dreams in your eyes,
Float away and turn into lullabies.



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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 3:15 pm:
Beautiful. MY favorite yet of your poems.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:25 pm :
Thank you. It means a lot!
 
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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 7:38 pm:
i really like this :) i love the word choices and the subtle rhyming! :)
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 12:24 am :
Thanks so much!
 
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Dark_MindThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 9:58 am:
Love the way you started and ended this...You are a really great writer..!
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:44 pm :
Really? Thanks!
 
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CarolynQ said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 6:52 pm:
Feels like a part of your soul just escaped onto the paper. This is pure, and brilliant. So perfect I'm blown away.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 11:38 pm :
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!
 
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JustAnotherOwl said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 2:59 pm:
This is gorgeous. The imagery is amazing! And I love the talk of lullabies...(: This is going under my favorites as well.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:07 am :
Thank you so much! That means a lot!
 
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Beachgirl1 said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:43 pm:
This is my favorite poem by you. It is beautiful! BEAUTIFUL this is going under my favorites! I wish i could give 1,000 stars!
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 7:38 pm :
Thank you so much! It really means a lot that its going under your favorites! Thank you!!
 
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TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:25 pm:
This is my favorite. :) The line "it does not creep" is the cutest thing. And I'm actually smiling, which doesn't happen a lot for poetry. :D Good work, captain.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:08 am :
Thank you!
 
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TwinDemons said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 5:10 pm:
Wow! I couldnt help but smile at this one. Very good poem. Love it!!!!!!!!!!
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:08 am :
Thank you so much!
 
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Raytheraym said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 3:58 pm:
I like it! Very peaceful.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:09 am :
Thank you!
 
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Camii said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
it is really good!! i liked it:D
 
Mystisha replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 5:13 am :

A really gud poem..nd i luv d line "disappear like a thousand lullabies" ..

Great work..\m/

 
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