We are the wild children

January 19, 2011
By Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond


We are the wild children
We don’t have a name
We are diamonds in the rough
Wishing to be discovered

My whole life
I’ve looked for a wild child
I’ve ridden ships
Planes
Even stood on the Eiffel Tower
But I didn’t find another wild child
Until I met you
Hidden in a dark place

You
You who always puts a smile on my face
Who lifts me up after I’ve sunken to the deepest depths
Who energizes and electrifies

Now I have a connection
That is as strong as blood or fate
I feel like if you die
I would know immediately
And a part of me would die too

But I am bound by secrets and rules
Secrets of abnormalities and of villains
Rules of God and of nature
The ones the wild child must not break

So I must keep my mouth shut and I must fly away
Or do you want me to stay?


The author's comments:
It's about forbidden love and a strong connection.

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on Sep. 22 2011 at 11:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I'm so glad you finally realized. Hello and I love you

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 9:06 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I wrote this at a time where I was very passionate and full of intensity. 

So I've captured that. Wow! Cool! Thanks! :)


on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:19 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

It's so intense full of passion.  So yes, I think I want you to stay and write some more. :D

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:05 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

You think very oddly...

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:20 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ah well, you know, wild children, savage kids, wild boar people. the terms seem to suggest each other.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:28 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Thank you! :)

Mawed by a bear? That was not the effect I was going for! Where did you get that? Oh dear... 

Dance on the monkey?          Boosflash, a lot of times you make no sense at all! 


on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i LOOOVE the title captain. it sounds like someones about to get mawed by a bear. and the ending really did its dance on the monkey.

no, you do not suck.


on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:51 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

To write something with love is a wonderful thing to do...

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 8:16 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Wow, thank you. :) And that was the goal of the piece. And I made it with real love, even though this piece was for school.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:27 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

My, I found myself enjoying immensely the idea of the 'wild children.' You wrote this so passionately and with such love, that the reader cannot help but being taken on the beautiful poetic journey which this piece creates. Very well done, Aderes.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 1:46 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Poems can be catchy, because poems are like songs and vice versa. This is actually one of the first poems I posted here. 

on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:41 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

I think this should have been published in the magazine. They leave so many talented works and artists to the dust...

on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:39 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Oh man, this is the very best one yet! You seem to hvae improved much, between your first poem posted to here, and this one. I love this one, very Star-girly :) I especially love the first stanza, it's so... catchy, I guess :] Who have you ever known that used to word 'catchy' to describe a poem? XD

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 30 2011 at 5:07 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Thank you! :)

on May. 30 2011 at 12:04 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

The pic is really apt.. goes well with the poem..

Your piece is like really mystical and people can interpret it in different ways.. thats the brst part..

for instance, right now, im reading the harry potter series all over again for the fifth time and no matter what you do/say, i'll connect the dots to hogwarts. :P

so i felt like this wild child was like a new evolution...

wow.


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 5:30 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Thank You! I think I might put that into a story. I'll put that on my to-do list. 

on May. 12 2011 at 4:38 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

This was very moving, but also passinate and exicting, you should interperet it into a story


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