The Universe to One

January 17, 2011
By XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan


A spiral galaxy
A planet near the sun
A cloudy atmosphere
A large continent
A smoggy nation
A small town
Cars going to church
A bike path next to a highway
A young man
Short and dark
Talks quietly, gently
Running with a young woman
Down the path
The cars going by
She's taller and blonde
Gasping, she can't breathe
Staring down the path
Into the fog
He watches the path
Go by underfoot
Still talking
A single tear
Slides down her cheek
And splashes on the path



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XCLover GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 11:32 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

Thank you so much!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:28 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

I love this. I LOVE HOW IT TRANSITIONS from bigger to smaller. I love ur ending! This is genius!


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