My Everything

January 18, 2011
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He is my morning up of orange juice.
The first word spoken to me long before dawn.
The first look in the mirror to start my day.

He is my heat in the summer,
but my cold in the winter.
The warmth of summer,
warming me like an oven.
And the cold of winter,
freezing me like an ice cube.

He is a star in the sky.
The brightest one,
shining bright.
The one that stands out and catches your eye.

He is the breath I take that keeps me going.
The times when I think no one is there,
he is right next to me,
ready to hold my hand.

He is my everything.
My day,
and my night.
My beginning,
and my end.
The first,
and last breath I will take.

He is like a tattoo on my heart.
His ink may fade,
but it will never completely go away.
Always with me,
a constant reminder of what we were,
and will be.

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Monkii said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 12:22 am
i ABSOLUTLY love it :D
Jazmyn P. said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 8:16 pm

this is really good. reminds me of my boyfriend:)

amazing job

Lostandconfused replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 8:46 pm
Amazing. Thats all i can say
imrighthereyouknow said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 6:43 pm
this is the type of boyfriend I want! nice poem :)
ForeverRemembered said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 9:12 pm
I love this! good job :)
TwinDemons said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 5:26 pm
This is a great poem. It remind me alot of my relationship, I love it!!!
Annabelle294 said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 10:11 am
I really like this, it flows nicely, and i love the structure.
Lonewolf1213 said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 9:36 am
iHeart this poem! Awesome job!
LucyInTheSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 7:38 am
a little choppy sometimes but good concept(: keep writing!
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