My Everything

January 18, 2011
By Katie Prichard BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Katie Prichard BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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He is my morning up of orange juice.
The first word spoken to me long before dawn.
The first look in the mirror to start my day.

He is my heat in the summer,
but my cold in the winter.
The warmth of summer,
warming me like an oven.
And the cold of winter,
freezing me like an ice cube.

He is a star in the sky.
The brightest one,
shining bright.
The one that stands out and catches your eye.

He is the breath I take that keeps me going.
The times when I think no one is there,
he is right next to me,
ready to hold my hand.

He is my everything.
My day,
and my night.
My beginning,
and my end.
The first,
and last breath I will take.

He is like a tattoo on my heart.
His ink may fade,
but it will never completely go away.
Always with me,
a constant reminder of what we were,
are,
and will be.

The author's comments:
This piece just came to me. I don't even have a boyfriend, so it's not about a certain guy. It just popped into my head one night.

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on Jan. 30 2011 at 12:22 am
Mysterious-strangers SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
no fear... no limits

i ABSOLUTLY love it :D

on Jan. 29 2011 at 8:46 pm
CJbutterfly SILVER, Chattahoochee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
\"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game\"

Amazing. Thats all i can say

on Jan. 28 2011 at 8:16 pm
Jazmyn Patterson BRONZE, San Diego, California
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this is really good. reminds me of my boyfriend:)

amazing job


on Jan. 28 2011 at 6:43 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

this is the type of boyfriend I want! nice poem :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 9:12 pm
hiddenbehindmyeyes BRONZE, Enola, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"They say loving you gives pain is full of sacrifies but i'd rather have alot of pain and many sacrifies then to not be loved by you."

I love this! good job :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 5:26 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

This is a great poem. It remind me alot of my relationship, I love it!!!

on Jan. 27 2011 at 10:11 am
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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I really like this, it flows nicely, and i love the structure.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 9:36 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

iHeart this poem! Awesome job!

on Jan. 27 2011 at 7:38 am
OneProzacADay PLATINUM, State College, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You are the universe expressing itself as human for a little while." -Eckhart Tolle

a little choppy sometimes but good concept(: keep writing!


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