Hello Fellow

January 18, 2011
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hello fellow cant you see
i want the color yellow from the buzzing bee
i want my favorite color blue from the silent see
i want to fill nothing for eternity
the sun is so bright so beautiful i must say
wishing i knew what more was there from day to day
wave by to me never say hi
my whole life is a goodbye
like yo yo ma play a beautiful song for me with a cello
you've already said bye so i say hello fellow

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Mgymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 5:17 pm

very interesting! i like your style of writing! only thing i saw was that you spelt sea wrong but other than that this was really good!! :)

also, if you get the chance could you take a look at my some of my poems such as A Mirror Image and The Sinners Confession (and comment and rate them????)  it would be greatly appreciated!! THANKS!

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