You Care?

January 15, 2011
I needed to talk to you..
Like as if I didn't I would never be close to anyone...
I went there that first day wondering why?
Why am I here again?
I figured it out when I heard you were going through a tough time...
So i took a risk and texted you a stranger who's name i didn't know
I feel as if god led me to you but also led you to me to help each other
I understand your life
How hard it is you worked
Being the man of the house for your Dad...
You help people before you help yourself
I just wish you don't push yourself too hard...
I guess you were given that life because you can live it
God truly took some time making you...Perfect

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Mgymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 5:30 pm

wow! this was very deep and was feeled with a ton of emotion! i love it!!

also, if you get the chance could you take a look at my some of my poems such as A Mirror Image and The Sinners Confession (and comment and rate them????)  it would be greatly appreciated!! THANKS!

EmotionsCrave replied...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 7:43 pm
Of course and thank you so much!!! and i will be sure to do all of the things u have asked! :)
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