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January 14, 2011
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I wish you could take an eraser to the heart,

And just erase.

Erase the hurt and lost loves,

The hoping that came to nothing,

The wishing that never came true,

The loneliness that was never resolved.

Erase the feelings that were wrong,

And the ones that were right,

But didn’t work out.

You would probably have a mess.

A weird and wonderful mixture of

Eraser shavings and

Multi-faceted feelings.

We’d all feel free

And when we got sad or hurt or lonely,

We could just

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BandGeekAndProud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2014 at 2:41 pm
This is simple and beautiful. Excellent.
InkWriter13 said...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 1:06 pm
Superb writing once again. Well-written, crystal clarity, a clever concept. Brilliant, again, Vidra. I would love your comment on any and all of my work. (Just kidding about the all... :D ). You are a great writer. Keep writing! 
Volleystar15 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:32 pm
that is so true. i would love to have my own eraser!!
Vidra This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 2:59 pm
haha :) i think everyone would love to have one. thanks for commenting! :)
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