Undescribable Feelings

January 14, 2011
By starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"


If love is an emotion
It can’t be expressed
But with the compassion only
We possess.
If you were describable
I’d say
In my heart you’ll rest
Forever to roam
Beating in my chest
If happiness is a feeling
You’d be the supreme master
Brightening my path
Bringing me laughter
If there was sadness
I’d tuck it away
Underneath my past,
Shadows and fears
I’d grasp your fingers
And in the joy
We’ll linger
Fighting the tears
If tomorrow was a word
You’ll be my forever
And I’ll scream
“Never say Never!”
If there was depression
I’d show it my affection
And it would
Fade away slowly
With degression….
If you were lonely
Lost and afraid
I’d be the moon
Lighting your way
If you were water
Slowly drifting apart
I’ll be the river
To calm your
Violent shiver
If we become
Twinkling beautiful stars
To you I’d shoot by
In this world
There just can’t be goodbye.


The author's comments:
I hope that any person who reads this poem will have a different perspective on it. I really want to hear what you guys think of this. Please rate and comment!! Enjoy, Thanks! :)

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on Jan. 31 2011 at 6:45 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Thank you so much!!!!!!!! Oh my goodness, I'm so glad you like'd it! This was a poem that truly came naturally to me for once, and nothing makes me feel better than hearing someone felt a connection to this like I did. THANK YOU!!! :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 11:45 am
tracker27 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
45 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As long as I have strength left, friends by my side, and the will to succeed, it's not over yet." -myself

this is so beautiful. love is an emotion, it cant be expressed. if anyone captured love, i think u did it best:) this really touched my heart. and reading beautiful poems and feeling inspired is why i started writting. because of amazing poets like you:)


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