I hate...

I hate the lies,
The way your eyes used to shine,
When we talked.
I hate the feelings,
That stay with me,
As i try to push them away.
I hate having to pretend,
That i don't care,
That you mean everything to me.
I hate not being able,
To tell you have i feel,
About your shining eyes.
I hate that i can't,
Make you happy,
And make your eyes shine again.
I hate that you scare me,
Because i know i love you,
And you know it too.
Are those feelings returned,
Well,when you figure it out,
Let me know.
Until then,
I'll be staring at the picture,
Of the boy with the shining eyes.
Remembering his hands,
As he held me close,
As he kissed me that last night.
I hate you.





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alanacarlene said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 5:06 pm
Heyyyy! this is really good! i always did love your endings and especially this one "i hate you" good one! love this poem too! miss ya in 4th period!!! :(
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:01 am
This is SO good! Its really powerful and I can definitely relate. It was good seeing you this weekend! :D
 
elisianicole101 replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:49 am

awwww thank ya'll!!! ((: and it was good seeing you too alex and Alana I miss it too!! /:

Alana the last one you read in 4th period is up too "Love me never?" I love you guys((:

 
alanacarlene replied...
Feb. 18, 2011 at 3:23 pm
ok i'll be sure to comment it!!! :)
 
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