Today

January 22, 2011
By MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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You said you loved me.
You never did
You said you’d stay here with me
You ran away
You said I could always call
You turned your phone off and ignored me
You said you’d hold my hand forever
You let go when I got in the way
You said all the things a girl wants to hear
You meant none of it, you played the game
You said you’d always protect me
You left me alone to suffer
You said you’d never hurt me
But you stabbed me in the heart
You said you’d give your life for me
You took my life for yours
Now look what you have done.
Broke every single promise you ever made.
And you broke my heart,
Today.


The author's comments:
I wrote this almost a year after we first met, and sometimes still bothers me today.

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NewMooBuunt said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 10:01 pm
Hi it is me... The author. I lost my account:( but I came back and wanted to let you all know that I have officially been over it for over year and a half!!:) thanks for helpin my through a tough time guys!!

on Jan. 29 2011 at 6:27 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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thanks! :)

on Jan. 29 2011 at 5:24 pm
ayyiitskayyx3 BRONZE, Port Jefferson Station, New York
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Favorite Quote:
The important thing is not to be bitter over life's disappointments. Learn to let go of the past. And recognize that every day won't be sunny, and when you find yourself lost in the darkness and despair, remember it's only in the black of night you see the stars. And those stars will lead you back home. So don't be afraid to make mistakes, to stumble and fall, cause most of the time, the greatest rewards come from doing the things that scare you the most. Maybe you'll get everything you wish for. Maybe you'll get more than you ever could have imagined. Who knows where life will take you. The road is long and in the end, the journey is the destination. -one tree hill ♥

I particularly like "You said you’d give your life for me You took my life for yours"

on Jan. 27 2011 at 8:28 am
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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Thank you :)

 


on Jan. 26 2011 at 10:19 pm
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

this is seriously beautiful. :')

on Jan. 26 2011 at 8:39 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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I know, but it feels nice to have someone tell me that- Thanks :)

on Jan. 26 2011 at 8:37 pm
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."

Amazing, I totally know how you feel. Just remember you're never alone and that person made you stronger and didn't make it into your future for a reason.

on Jan. 26 2011 at 8:33 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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Yeah that's what you have to do. Thanks and I will :)

Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:25 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

Well remeber the good times and keep on writing great poems.

on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:24 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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Thanks :) Hope you read more of my pieces!

on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:23 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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Thanks. I'm fine but sometime you see a cute couple on the street and all the pain comes back...

Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 5:12 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

I love it! I hope your okay.

Zopeless said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 3:44 pm
Zopeless, SHERBORNE, Other
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This is really good! 

on Jan. 26 2011 at 12:42 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Thanks. Yeah I still feel it especially on Feb 23, his bday, and March 14, first kiss.

Oh, well... Life still has to move on, but memories are meant to linger.


on Jan. 26 2011 at 12:40 pm
MooBunny SILVER, Manahawkin, New Jersey
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Thank you!

on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:55 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

A broken heart takes time to heal, they say, but surley it is never healed. I understand why it can still bother you... Heartbokenness is a cursed desiese of mind and body... I feel the pain for near the 12th of Feb, is when me and my ex first started dating. You are not alone.

But keep up your work and do not let life get you down ^^

 

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.


on Jan. 25 2011 at 9:02 pm
I love this.


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