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You said you loved me.
You never did
You said you’d stay here with me
You ran away
You said I could always call
You turned your phone off and ignored me
You said you’d hold my hand forever
You let go when I got in the way
You said all the things a girl wants to hear
You meant none of it, you played the game
You said you’d always protect me
You left me alone to suffer
You said you’d never hurt me
But you stabbed me in the heart
You said you’d give your life for me
You took my life for yours
Now look what you have done.
Broke every single promise you ever made.
And you broke my heart,
Today.



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NewMooBuunt said...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 10:01 pm
Hi it is me... The author. I lost my account:( but I came back and wanted to let you all know that I have officially been over it for over year and a half!!:) thanks for helpin my through a tough time guys!!
 
ayyiitskayyx3 said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 5:24 pm
I particularly like "You said you’d give your life for me You took my life for yours"
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 6:27 pm
thanks! :)
 
Avalon,Liv said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 10:19 pm
this is seriously beautiful. :')
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 8:28 am

Thank you :)

 

 
SecrecyGirl15 said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 8:37 pm
Amazing, I totally know how you feel. Just remember you're never alone and that person made you stronger and didn't make it into your future for a reason.
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 8:39 pm
I know, but it feels nice to have someone tell me that- Thanks :)
 
Eagle said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:12 pm
I love it! I hope your okay.
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:23 pm
Thanks. I'm fine but sometime you see a cute couple on the street and all the pain comes back...
 
Eagle replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:25 pm
Well remeber the good times and keep on writing great poems.
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 8:33 pm
Yeah that's what you have to do. Thanks and I will :)
 
Zopeless said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 3:44 pm
This is really good! 
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:24 pm
Thanks :) Hope you read more of my pieces!
 
Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:55 am

A broken heart takes time to heal, they say, but surley it is never healed. I understand why it can still bother you... Heartbokenness is a cursed desiese of mind and body... I feel the pain for near the 12th of Feb, is when me and my ex first started dating. You are not alone.

But keep up your work and do not let life get you down ^^

 

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.

 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 12:42 pm

Thanks. Yeah I still feel it especially on Feb 23, his bday, and March 14, first kiss.

Oh, well... Life still has to move on, but memories are meant to linger.

 
JustSurrenderKayla said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 9:02 pm
I love this.
 
MooBunny replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 12:40 pm
Thank you!
 
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