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How could you and what about you

January 13, 2011
By TrueIdentity SILVER, San Diego, California
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TrueIdentity SILVER, San Diego, California
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Let your true self be known

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How could you walk out of my life that fast?
How could you let me go?
Am I not special?
How could you not fight for me?
Do I matter to you?
How could you go far away and not keep in touch?
You left and you are never coming back?
How could you?
Do you ever wonder about what I am doing?
Do you ever wonder how I'm growing up to be?
What about me?

The author's comments:
This is what I felt when my dad left me. All these questions are still unanswered.
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TrueIdentity SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 11:52 pm
TrueIdentity SILVER, San Diego, California
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thanks i made this for everyone whos father left them nd they will never see them again.
Avalon,Liv GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 10:40 pm
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

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i can relate exactly to you. :'| <3