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End My Misery

I'd rather be grabbed
And be stabbed,
Because even THAT hurts less
Than a broken heart.

So stab me in the hand,
In the feet, in the back.
Or you could stab me where it's marked -
Straight through the heart,
And end my misery.



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elisianicole101 said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 7:19 pm:

Alana,AMAZING!! Is all I can say as always,you never fail to amaze me!! i miss you in 4th period!! i made more poem too((: lol some are up.

And ALWAYS REMEMBER TO KEEP WRITING!!! ((: <3 YA!!!

 
alanacarlene replied...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 5:37 pm :

uh yeah!!!!! i'll totally check em out! becka said one of your poems you read was amazing and i miss you toooooooooooo!

always keep writing!!!!!!! ::::::::)

 
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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 3:24 pm:
Agreeeeed. I know what you mean. This is good. Its sad, but having a broken heart hurts worse :/ Keep writing girl!!! Another chapter is pending for my book :)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 9:13 pm :
yea and yay! i can't wait for it to get approved!!!!
 
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