cold concrete

January 8, 2011
By tatertot93 BRONZE, Woods Cross, Utah
tatertot93 BRONZE, Woods Cross, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
yesterday is history, tomorow is a mistery, and today is a gift. that is why its called the present.

When mixed properly Gravel, Metal, and stuff that looks like plain old sand makes “in my opinion” the best napping spot ever!

The feel of this metal and gravel mixture reminds me of fine grain sand paper yet it is soft like a leaf.
The smell some how reminds me of my cat.
don’t ask.

I can’t hear it but it has a song.
Its in my head but I can only hear it when I’m resting

I yearn for a hug from this lifeless stone walkway, the kind of hug that you get from a blanket.
It warms me to rest on the cold shaded area of processed earth.

The author's comments:
this was one of my first poems from my creative writing class

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