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Darkness

January 4, 2011
By MSUrocks BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
MSUrocks BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
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The darkness fills the air
All around me
Darkness.

Alone.
Betrayed.
Forgotten.

People who have gone before
Me
All special
Wind my only friend

Snow whispers, while it hits the trees
Everywhere I look, words appear.

My head spinning.
Lists

of


Things


and


Things
I. Have. Done.
Everywhere

My only hope
Water

I feel

Angry

Frightened

Upset

Will anyone help me? I lay hopeless

Darkness fills the air
For the last time.
Alone
Betrayed
Forgotten.

All around me
Darkness.


The author's comments:
This piece was inspired by all the people who are sad, lonely & forgotten. So many times people just walk by others and don't notice them.

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on Jan. 26 2011 at 8:57 pm
Soccerguy SILVER, Radford, Virginia
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i really like this I have a poem called darkness also =)

on Jan. 26 2011 at 6:27 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

I really like it.

on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:53 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

Quite wonderful. I understand your pain and hopelessness here. (Surley hope I am not offending you) But this quite good, I can feel the emotions your getting at. I only ask you keep up the work and do not let life get you down. I understand how that is at times. ^^

 

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