I hate you

January 4, 2011
By shy-writer GOLD, Spotsylvania, Virginia
shy-writer GOLD, Spotsylvania, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're young. We don't need, a boy to love, hold, kiss. We won't always be able to relax and be kids, but we'll always be able to love. So I'm going to get out there and liven up this world, leave my mark, make a difference." -Anonymous

I hate you.
I hate the way you laugh.
I hate the way you cry.
I hate the way you speak to her,
And here I was thinking you were shy.

I hate the way you walk,
The way you dress,
The way you talk.

I hate your big nose, tan skin, brown eyes.
The way you act like you don’t give a crap
And how you are oh so nice.

I hate how you remind me of him,
Friends with him
Exactly like him.

But what I hate more than anything,
And why I can’t stand to see your face
Is the knowledge that you love someone.
And it’s not this disgrace.

Someone beautiful, talented, and nowhere near like me.
Someone who knows people, important people, unlike thee
Someone who will laugh, cry, be kind to you.
It will never be me, it will never be me.
Because, I hate you

The author's comments:
I wrote this a LONG time ago. But I still have the same feelings and I thought it was a pretty good piece so...yeah

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on Jan. 27 2011 at 5:42 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

it sounds pretty good to me, its kinda negative, but i think it was written well

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