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Destiny

This world is full of enemies, broken hearts, and trickery
I don't know what it is with me, I don't believe in destiny
But it's funny how in such an imperfect place
something can work out so perfectly
So maybe I do believe in destiny
'Cause when I'm down you're there for me
and when I'm up you're sky high with me
'cause I can fly with you
and tell no lies with you
No matter what we're doing, or how we're feeling
I can be myself with you.



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PeaceLoveRosalie said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 4:15 pm:
I love this poem- it's simply beautiful, and you write it with an acute sense of rythm.
 
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tinkebell said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 8:47 am:
this is really good it really spoke to me:) great job!!
 
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Derya I. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 5:00 pm:
This poem was so much diffrent from the one i just red. Destiny is something you dont know if going to happen and always you dont see it coming but its just meant to be , for examle to people that are destined to be with eachother are meant to be with eachother and they dont even know it .
 
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HisPurePrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 11:24 am:
pretty, and it catches your eyes, in a way.  i like it a lot!
 
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time_captive said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 11:19 am:

I absolutely love this! C:

Kudos.

 
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