January 4, 2011
By Savannah-Sky SILVER, Bayport, New York
Savannah-Sky SILVER, Bayport, New York
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This world is full of enemies, broken hearts, and trickery
I don't know what it is with me, I don't believe in destiny
But it's funny how in such an imperfect place
something can work out so perfectly
So maybe I do believe in destiny
'Cause when I'm down you're there for me
and when I'm up you're sky high with me
'cause I can fly with you
and tell no lies with you
No matter what we're doing, or how we're feeling
I can be myself with you.

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on Jan. 25 2011 at 4:15 pm
I love this poem- it's simply beautiful, and you write it with an acute sense of rythm.

on Jan. 25 2011 at 8:47 am
tinkebell BRONZE, Seffner, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
why try being someone else its a waste of the person you are

this is really good it really spoke to me:) great job!!

on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:00 pm
derya inan SILVER, New York
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This poem was so much diffrent from the one i just red. Destiny is something you dont know if going to happen and always you dont see it coming but its just meant to be , for examle to people that are destined to be with eachother are meant to be with eachother and they dont even know it .

on Jan. 24 2011 at 11:24 am
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
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pretty, and it catches your eyes, in a way.  i like it a lot!

on Jan. 24 2011 at 11:19 am
June_Survive SILVER, Kirbyville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Limitations live only in our minds. But if we use our imaginations, our possibilities become limitless.” -Jamie Paolinetti

"In the end, everything will be okay. If everything is not okay, it's not the end."

I absolutely love this! C:



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