Superman

January 12, 2011
By whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.


My superman is someone brave,
and strong,
and unafraid.
But also loving,
and lovely,
someone who can love me.
Cute,
with a spark of innocence
but with a dark side.
Someone who's perfect,
not for everyone,or everything
just for me.


The author's comments:
i think every girl should have her superman.

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on Dec. 11 2011 at 1:55 pm
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
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Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

omg...me 2....:)thats trueee though

on Dec. 10 2011 at 7:20 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

thanksssssss carrie! guess i forgot the comma!!! haha. i hope though

on Dec. 10 2011 at 7:19 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

hey thats true, i havent had my first kiss yet i just think that when we r older we all need somebody to lean on and love unconditionally. thanks though

on Dec. 10 2011 at 7:18 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

thanks resonating!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 7:17 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

thanks , I guess I could've, thanks for the advice!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 5:46 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

cute poem but i think you could've used better words

on Dec. 10 2011 at 10:35 am
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
8 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

yeah...i  dont want one yet because as young people i  think  that  we need to  live life and i  dont thnk  we would be mature about things...itr can  ruin  our lives and we wont be able to  do things when  ur in  a relationship...so  yeahhhh...i mean  we can  have crushes but not a superman....lol:)

but awesomeeee:)luv it<3


on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:36 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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I like this :) It has a cutesy factor that I actually love here, and I love the simplicity of it, really. 

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:25 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

i want mine too, btw, havent found mine tho

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:25 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

hanks thalia :)))))

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:24 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Great job!  My only criticism is that there should be a space after your comma in the line "not for everyone..."  Other than that, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this.  And don't worry, your superman will come. :)

on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:06 pm
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
8 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

omg...very nice written...luv it.....id want one......im  too  young....lol   but someday...:)

 


on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:50 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

thank you!!!! and that is soo awesome, I'm soo happy 4 you!!! i hope i find mine too!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 2:36 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

This is really nice. I like it a lot. And it's really cool because I think I may have finally found my superman.

on Jan. 25 2011 at 8:03 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

Thank you!!!

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on Jan. 25 2011 at 7:57 pm
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