Superman

January 12, 2011
My superman is someone brave,
and strong,
and unafraid.
But also loving,
and lovely,
someone who can love me.
Cute,
with a spark of innocence
but with a dark side.
Someone who's perfect,
not for everyone,or everything
just for me.





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thalialisset said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 1:55 pm
omg...me 2....:)thats trueee though
 
MsAnonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 5:46 pm
cute poem but i think you could've used better words
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 7:17 pm
thanks , I guess I could've, thanks for the advice!
 
thalialisset said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 10:35 am

yeah...i  dont want one yet because as young people i  think  that  we need to  live life and i  dont thnk  we would be mature about things...itr can  ruin  our lives and we wont be able to  do things when  ur in  a relationship...so  yeahhhh...i mean  we can  have crushes but not a superman....lol:)

but awesomeeee:)luv it<3

 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 7:19 pm
hey thats true, i havent had my first kiss yet i just think that when we r older we all need somebody to lean on and love unconditionally. thanks though
 
Resonating_Words said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:36 pm
I like this :) It has a cutesy factor that I actually love here, and I love the simplicity of it, really. 
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 7:18 pm
thanks resonating!
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:24 pm
Great job!  My only criticism is that there should be a space after your comma in the line "not for everyone..."  Other than that, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this.  And don't worry, your superman will come. :)
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 7:20 pm
thanksssssss carrie! guess i forgot the comma!!! haha. i hope though
 
thalialisset said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 8:06 pm

omg...very nice written...luv it.....id want one......im  too  young....lol   but someday...:)

 

 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:25 pm
hanks thalia :)))))
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:25 pm
i want mine too, btw, havent found mine tho
 
WritingLoverForever said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 2:36 pm
This is really nice. I like it a lot. And it's really cool because I think I may have finally found my superman.
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:50 pm
thank you!!!! and that is soo awesome, I'm soo happy 4 you!!! i hope i find mine too!
 
Lizpwns said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 7:57 pm
Pro. Simply Pro.
 
whateverjuliet replied...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 8:03 pm
Thank you!!!
 
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