this poem

January 13, 2011
By Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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as the sun sets down on this day
in my bed is where i lay
with my razor in my hand
ready just t take a stand
the blade goes in my wrist
the blood starts to flow
i smile since all i know is
the blood is all my worries
but i cant stop crying
because i know I'm dieing
no one hears my muffled cry
my life will soon slip by
I'm sorry i didn't try everyone
the blade went to deep...



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on Apr. 27 2012 at 4:51 pm
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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I do not cut anymore and thanks. I have done poems ranging from all sorts of things but I do these poems because of my past experience.

on Apr. 26 2012 at 11:53 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Stay Strong! <3

First of all I want to say I like your name. I'm mexican as well so I can relate or at least my familia can haha . I like this how you put emotion through every word . Its a sad poem but so many can relate . Know you don't have to answer this question cause its personal but Do you do this? cut i mean? If you do I'm here for you. Even though I'm stranger o_o anyways 5 stars!


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