Overthink

January 12, 2011
By LyssaNoTolerance BRONZE, Bordentown, New Jersey
LyssaNoTolerance BRONZE, Bordentown, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
" PEACE. It does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise, trouble or hard work. It means to be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart."- unknown


I think I overthink
Everything I think about.
I think so hard
I might say it aloud
Then everyone will know...
What I've been thinking, so...
Then I know it won't be
As dreaded as it seemed
On my head,
as I sleep
With no worries,
And sweet dreams

The author's comments:
It's about a secret that I sometimes find slipping out of my mouth and how I wonder what would happen if everyone knew

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on Jan. 26 2011 at 1:59 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

This was pretty good! I think it's very cute and I understand where you're coming from haha:) It's just that the way it was worded was a hair awkward, so it didn't really flow like a poem should. I would also add something between the third and fourth lines. I don't know what, but it'd be something. Keep writing!

Simaaa BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 6:21 pm
Simaaa BRONZE, Bordentown, New Jersey
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Fav Quote: from Winnie the Pooh- when we can't be together, keep in your heart I'll stay there forever.

Lyss that was EXTREMLY WELL WRITTEN. PS. WHATS AMIS BACKWARDS?;)


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