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Overthink

I think I overthink
Everything I think about.
I think so hard
I might say it aloud
Then everyone will know...
What I've been thinking, so...
Then I know it won't be
As dreaded as it seemed
On my head,
as I sleep
With no worries,
And sweet dreams





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gracegirl29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 1:59 pm
This was pretty good! I think it's very cute and I understand where you're coming from haha:) It's just that the way it was worded was a hair awkward, so it didn't really flow like a poem should. I would also add something between the third and fourth lines. I don't know what, but it'd be something. Keep writing!
 
Amis.O_oThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 6:21 pm
Lyss that was EXTREMLY WELL WRITTEN. PS. WHATS AMIS BACKWARDS?;)
 
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