Days Like These.

January 10, 2011
By sneakatoke67 BRONZE, Park City, Utah
sneakatoke67 BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Some days the sky is blue, filled with a varity of white cotton balls in all different shapes and sizes.



The sun is sitting flat on the peak of the mountain like a ball of butter on my toast.



The music of the birds chirping all around me, I feel like singing along.



A warm breeze blows my hair to the left and I have to fix it constantly.



Days like these, I am glad I am alive.



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on Jan. 22 2011 at 10:14 am
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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This is good! Perhaps a few more lines would hav been nice, but the ones you have are so true and so good. Also, I think the last line might read better if it was written "Days like these, I am glad to be alive" Just because saying "I am.. I am" is a bit difficult. Other than that, this is really good! Nice job :)




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