Stuck In A Cave

January 9, 2011
By , Western Springs, IL
I sit in this cave,
Desperate for exits but
instead of looking for escapes I
lie here for days forcing myself to believe there is no way out,

But then I begin to panic
I start to search for the light,
Feeling around for holes in the wall
leading to a way out of this cave,
I know there is a light at the end of the cave
but I cannot find it,

I run further into the dark space,
Farther and farther and faster and faster,
To find out,
The exit is not just a doorway but more of an idea
and I am unable to come up with that idea.

So I am stuck here,
Writing poetry.

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just-a-joy said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 8:38 pm
beautifly relatable some times i feel stuck in my own head and cand feel trapped  
zhlen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 6:53 pm
This was really good and I really enjoyed it. It's consice. Can you check out my work too, thanks.
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