Friend's Disappointment!

January 7, 2011
By I.Hope.You.Dance. SILVER, Somewhere In, Florida
I.Hope.You.Dance. SILVER, Somewhere In, Florida
8 articles 9 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would define, in brief the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of beauty!" -Edgar Allan Poe

"...All little girls should be told they're pretty, even if they aren't.” -Marilyn Monroe!


Not a smile or a laugh
I give you my tears
It is my pain lying in my broken heart
It promises weakness of a young girl
like a bird attacked by a lion.

Here.
It will break your heart
like the death of a friend
it will make your happiness
turn into grief.

I am trying to be strong

Not a rainbow or sunshine.

I will give you a cloudy day.
Its darkness will make you cry,
sadness and hurt
as I am,
for as long as I have been.

Take it.
Its bad days turn into a fake smile,
If you like.
Penetrating.
Its fake smile will attach to your face,
stay in your heart.


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on Jan. 19 2011 at 5:13 am
I.Hope.You.Dance. SILVER, Somewhere In, Florida
8 articles 9 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would define, in brief the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of beauty!" -Edgar Allan Poe

"...All little girls should be told they're pretty, even if they aren't.” -Marilyn Monroe!

Haha, it's just easy to compare people to the weather, and to well, just nature in general. :D

on Jan. 18 2011 at 10:32 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Wow. I love this. It's especially good because you didn't stick on a happy ending. In fact, you kind of just told the person that you know what it's like I guess. I like the way you phrased the last stanza, I couldn't have said it better myself. Not that I'm, like, professional or anything--not even close! But you get your point down and connect with--well--me, and you completely understand what you're talking about. I can tell from all your work that you like weather: just a comment. C:


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