Memories are Like Scars

January 2, 2011
When I want them gone they never go away

Echos locked on broken past

My mind reels

Feeling smashed

I try to look away

But the beast haunts me

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SarasotaWonder said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 1:24 pm

Great job, have a great 'beat' or 'sound' to it, exspecially with the lack of punctuation. Descriptive too :)


Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 12:13 am
I like this. It works well.
wishing4thebest2day replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 8:44 pm
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