I'll talk to air for hours

December 30, 2010
By Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...


Warm air passed by us
and I smelled your amazing scent
children ran by us, laughing
and I felt your breath as you whispered into my ear
we spoke for hours
and the sun went down as we grasped each others hands
then a woman sat down beside me and she asked who I was talking to,
I laughed and looked at your face,
and then I cried,
for you were never even there
all this time,
talking to air....



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on Aug. 5 2011 at 10:12 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

Beautiful , and so sad!

I wish I would have known more about why the other was not there.


on Aug. 5 2011 at 2:24 pm
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

why thank you lol

on Aug. 4 2011 at 6:52 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow, very thought-provoking! I wasn't expecting that ending, even after reading the title. Great job!


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