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Warm air passed by us
and I smelled your amazing scent
children ran by us, laughing
and I felt your breath as you whispered into my ear
we spoke for hours
and the sun went down as we grasped each others hands
then a woman sat down beside me and she asked who I was talking to,
I laughed and looked at your face,
and then I cried,
for you were never even there
all this time,
talking to air....



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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 10:12 pm:

Beautiful , and so sad!

I wish I would have known more about why the other was not there.

 
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JerseyGirl716 said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 6:52 pm:
Wow, very thought-provoking! I wasn't expecting that ending, even after reading the title. Great job!
 
Kbuschan replied...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 2:24 pm :
why thank you lol
 
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