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Let life take you down its road,
but please be careful,
when you hit a bump,
try not to swerve,
you might go tumbling,
down the wrong path.
Because of that one swerve,
you could crash,
and slip under the guardrail,
and lose all control.
So next time you come across that bump,

don't swerve, go over it slowly,
if not.. i think you'll regret it.



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BrittieVee said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 12:17 pm

Thank-you very much for your feedback :) Also if you get a chance.. 

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Phresshmen said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 4:48 pm
I LOVE IT! i love the personification you used! how you are explain live trough a car crashing :)
 
PeterLicari replied...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 5:01 pm
I like how you wrote it. It has several meanings you can take from it from the obvious "drive safe" message to a multitude of philisophical connotations. A sign of well written poetry.
 
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