Life and its bumpy road

December 30, 2010
By BrittieVee SILVER, Torbay, Other
BrittieVee SILVER, Torbay, Other
6 articles 4 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wow I can't belive I won,
This is awesome,
Don't trip and fall,
I'm gonna get to thank the fans,
This is so cool,
Oh kany'e west is here,
Cool haircut,
What are ya doing there...
Ouch...
I guess I'm not gonna get to thank the fans"
— Taylor Swift <3


Let life take you down its road,
but please be careful,
when you hit a bump,
try not to swerve,
you might go tumbling,
down the wrong path.
Because of that one swerve,
you could crash,
and slip under the guardrail,
and lose all control.
So next time you come across that bump,

don't swerve, go over it slowly,
if not.. i think you'll regret it.



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on Jan. 19 2011 at 12:17 pm
BrittieVee SILVER, Torbay, Other
6 articles 4 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wow I can't belive I won,
This is awesome,
Don't trip and fall,
I'm gonna get to thank the fans,
This is so cool,
Oh kany'e west is here,
Cool haircut,
What are ya doing there...
Ouch...
I guess I'm not gonna get to thank the fans"
— Taylor Swift <3

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on Jan. 18 2011 at 5:01 pm
PeterLicari BRONZE, Chuluota, Florida
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
To give anything less than your best is to sacrifice the Gift.- Steve Prefontaine

I like how you wrote it. It has several meanings you can take from it from the obvious "drive safe" message to a multitude of philisophical connotations. A sign of well written poetry.

on Jan. 18 2011 at 4:48 pm
Phresshmen SILVER, Miami, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly” -SAM KEEN
"You cant change someone who dont want to be changed, but you can help someone who needs it" -yours truly

I LOVE IT! i love the personification you used! how you are explain live trough a car crashing :)


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