Maybe I am too young...

January 1, 2011
By Mohammed Hussain GOLD, New York City, New York
Mohammed Hussain GOLD, New York City, New York
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People always tell me I’m too young to
Be in love.
And, as I sit here, barely an adult, I realize
That, perhaps, they are right.
Still, I’d like to say that I have been in love with
One girl
And, perhaps my emotions are understandable to my peers only.
It’s a little bit of a
heart-thumping
Adrenaline-rushing
Good feeling.
In my eyes, she is everything.
She’s not perfect, sure.
At least, I’d like to think that she’s not.
I’d like to convince myself she’s not.
But it’s kind of hard.
She’s like a living, breathing, walking Rose.
Nothing else can compare.
She feels like the world.
When she’s happy, I’m euphoric
If she’s sad, the world doesn’t exist
When she’s hurt, I am dead
And If she’s gone,
Then so am I.
But I’m young, and I probably wouldn’t know
Or be able to comprehend
What Love is.



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on May. 30 2011 at 8:27 am
writingrocks GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to learn to love yourself before you learn to love others."

Thanks! I appreciate it a lot!!!

on May. 28 2011 at 3:39 pm
Mohammed Hussain GOLD, New York City, New York
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thank you. I'll definitely look at it:)

 


on Jan. 17 2011 at 7:23 am
writingrocks GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to learn to love yourself before you learn to love others."

There was lots of vivid details in your poem. I could just imagine the love that is there for the girl. Could you check out my poem, "Learn"? Thanks! 




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