Fine Line

December 11, 2010
She is skinny
She is beautiful
But when she stares
into that frightful thing
it reflects a worse image
this is too big,
too awkward
the perception:

it causes for measures
to fix this...horror
run till breath
no longer knows her lungs
carefully choosing
the energy to apply
to force down her throat
barely staying alive

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troublemaker said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 4:46 pm
this really describes the reality of the situation...its so scary but the way you worded this poem is perfect...
jasmin101 said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 9:34 am

i like the way u described everything

though i did not get the hole idea i hope u make it more clear


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