Fine Line

December 11, 2010
By SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
8 articles 6 photos 7 comments

She is skinny
She is beautiful
But when she stares
into that frightful thing
it reflects a worse image
this is too big,
too awkward
the perception:

it causes for measures
to fix this...horror
run till breath
no longer knows her lungs
carefully choosing
the energy to apply
to force down her throat
barely staying alive

The author's comments:
Common problem in today's society, i just hope people will come to recognize it

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on Jan. 17 2011 at 4:46 pm
troublemaker BRONZE, Middlefield, Connecticut
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this really describes the reality of the situation...its so scary but the way you worded this poem is perfect...

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 9:34 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

i like the way u described everything

though i did not get the hole idea i hope u make it more clear


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