Run And Hide

December 11, 2010
By , Eastlake, OH
Its Falling Beside Me
I Feel Like I'm Flying
You Are Killing
My Hope and Joy In Life
I Am feeling you crying
On My Little Shoulder
And Nothing is holding me here
You Left Me Flying
Like I Was High
You Told Me
Everything Was Fine
I Cry Some Tears
And Cut Some More
Waiting For You to Come

You Never Come
So I Run and Run
Till I Run into a Truck Coming By
Your Standing there
Just watching me
As I slowly die

You Run and Hide
Not Even Crying a Tear
I Faint Away
Nothing Left To Say
Only To Die Alone

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. said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 8:47 am

love it loads

giving u a 4


theMidnightSonnet said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 2:58 pm

This is absolutely stunning. There's so much trembling emotion and beauty in it. I've heard people say that there's beauty in the breakdown, and I think this is evidence of it.

I've felt like this before.

Anways well done. Can you check out my work?

Love_Is_Love replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 5:47 pm
Sure! I will check out your work!
LaShay_25 said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 9:01 am
I love  your poem, i can relate very well but I always came back. read my work?
Love_Is_Love replied...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 10:57 am
Yes I would love to read your work. And Thank You
musiqqlvr31 said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 5:04 am
my heart recites this poem each day...i have never been so touched
volleyball17 said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 11:36 pm
I agree with you silentvocal.. the piece was amazing i love it.. but there was wording choices.. it didnt flow good at alll.. but other than that good job
dolphin13 said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 5:32 pm
Wow! Very Intense!
silentvocal replied...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 6:40 pm
I felt some raw emotion when I read it, it's definately got something to say. I kind of wish that it wasn't as choppy, i don't mean that the poem's idea was choppy but literally that the wording was choppy and not so much flowing so it was hard to be able to read it. other than that it's really a great peice. :)
stawr said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 4:16 pm
I like this poem.
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