Run And Hide

December 11, 2010
By Anonymous

Its Falling Beside Me
I Feel Like I'm Flying
You Are Killing
My Hope and Joy In Life
I Am feeling you crying
On My Little Shoulder
And Nothing is holding me here
You Left Me Flying
Like I Was High
You Told Me
Everything Was Fine
I Cry Some Tears
And Cut Some More
Waiting For You to Come
Home

You Never Come
So I Run and Run
Till I Run into a Truck Coming By
Your Standing there
Just watching me
As I slowly die

You Run and Hide
Not Even Crying a Tear
I Faint Away
Nothing Left To Say
Only To Die Alone


The author's comments:
The Inspiration came out of me from a Experience I had. I Intensified the story a little but this is it. Hope You Enjoy

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on Jan. 20 2011 at 5:47 pm
Zombie_Girl SILVER, Eastlake, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But I've bought a big bat. I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me!”

-Dr. Seuss

Sure! I will check out your work!

. said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:47 am

love it loads

giving u a 4

 


on Jan. 17 2011 at 2:58 pm
theMidnightSonnet BRONZE, Colton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot
The world forgetting by the world forgot
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd"

This is absolutely stunning. There's so much trembling emotion and beauty in it. I've heard people say that there's beauty in the breakdown, and I think this is evidence of it.

I've felt like this before.

Anways well done. Can you check out my work?


on Jan. 17 2011 at 10:57 am
Zombie_Girl SILVER, Eastlake, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But I've bought a big bat. I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me!”

-Dr. Seuss

Yes I would love to read your work. And Thank You

on Jan. 17 2011 at 9:01 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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I love  your poem, i can relate very well but I always came back. read my work?

on Jan. 17 2011 at 5:04 am
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE, Chennai,Tamil Nadu, Other
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my heart recites this poem each day...i have never been so touched

on Jan. 16 2011 at 11:36 pm
volleyball17 PLATINUM, Grimes, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You cant fail if you dont try

I agree with you silentvocal.. the piece was amazing i love it.. but there was wording choices.. it didnt flow good at alll.. but other than that good job

on Jan. 16 2011 at 6:40 pm
silentvocal SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Don't try to fix what isn't broken

I felt some raw emotion when I read it, it's definately got something to say. I kind of wish that it wasn't as choppy, i don't mean that the poem's idea was choppy but literally that the wording was choppy and not so much flowing so it was hard to be able to read it. other than that it's really a great peice. :)

on Jan. 16 2011 at 5:32 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Wow! Very Intense!

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on Jan. 16 2011 at 4:16 pm
stawr, Nashville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You have to make a living to get somewhere in life.

I like this poem.


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