Perfection

January 4, 2011
By , North Pole, AK
It's funny how perfectly in tune we are.
The exact moment you take in a breath,
I find myself doing the same.
I place my hand on your chest,
And, it seems as if our heartbeats are in perfect rhythm.
When you speak to me,
I know I've heard your voice before.
In my dreams that is.
We wrap our two hands into one,
And, for the first time in my life, I know that I have something perfect.





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Monkee63 said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 9:01 pm
It is so perfectly written I love it!
 
xxEmoZombieDollxx said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 1:02 pm
Honestly....Perfect<3
 
being.me said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 10:39 pm
wow! really good.. i know exactly how you feeeell :3
 
Heart_ily said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 9:17 pm

WOW this is really good.

i know we all go thru love the ups and downs but we have to remeber the wonderful moments and not depend on the bad times cuz then we loose ourselves.

(i speak from experience)

Over all ahmazinq poem

 
LettingGo said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 7:01 pm
this is exactly how i feel about my ex.
 
Supername2 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 3:45 pm
Nice! It's quiet and sweet :)
 
freakgirl98259 said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 9:23 am
Absolutly Beautiful love it
 
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