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January 4, 2011
By Anonymous

It's funny how perfectly in tune we are.
The exact moment you take in a breath,
I find myself doing the same.
I place my hand on your chest,
And, it seems as if our heartbeats are in perfect rhythm.
When you speak to me,
I know I've heard your voice before.
In my dreams that is.
We wrap our two hands into one,
And, for the first time in my life, I know that I have something perfect.

© Anonymous

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Monkee63 SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:01 pm
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I want to feel my life while I'm in it"- Meryl Streep
"Live, Life Love"
"Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain."

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It is so perfectly written I love it!
xxEmoZombieDollxx said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 1:02 pm
xxEmoZombieDollxx, Greenwood, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" She strikes a pose but then she die;s noone knows she;s a beautiful suicide<3 "

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Honestly....Perfect<3
being.me SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 10:39 pm
being.me SILVER, Port Washingtom, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
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A piano with broken keys, still plays (:

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wow! really good.. i know exactly how you feeeell :3
Heart_ily said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 9:17 pm
Heart_ily, Fort Myers, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
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Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
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WOW this is really good.

i know we all go thru love the ups and downs but we have to remeber the wonderful moments and not depend on the bad times cuz then we loose ourselves.

(i speak from experience)

Over all ahmazinq poem

ShenanigansAndMalarkey PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 7:01 pm
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this is exactly how i feel about my ex.
Supername2 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 3:45 pm
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Nice! It's quiet and sweet :)
freakgirl98259 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 9:23 am
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Absolutly Beautiful love it