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Sleeping on the Dark Side of the Sun

She stared at me and screamed
Looked into my eyes and died there
Trapped in my eyes forever
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun

She broke her stare for a single split second
In a blink she was gone
And again I lost her to the night
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun

I awoke from it all, hot and sticky
I might have cried but I can’t recall
That night is all just a blur to me
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun




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CarolynQ said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 10:55 pm:
wOWWW tHIS IS sOOO goOoOd i love the title and the entire piece itself.
 
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Jun. 14, 2011 at 1:44 am :
Thanks:)  cAPS lOCK WAS ON AND YOU DIDN'T REALIZE IT?  hahahahaha:)
 
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Basketball23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 9:28 am:
This is AMAZING!!!  The meaning travels deep into my soul.  Keep on writing!!!
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 8, 2011 at 2:42 am :
Thanks:)  :):):)
 
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Zazawish777 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 5:57 pm:
awesome. I like the word choice
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 6:08 pm :
Thanks:)  It's not my best... But it's very emotional to me.
 
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