Sleeping on the Dark Side of the Sun

December 30, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


She stared at me and screamed
Looked into my eyes and died there
Trapped in my eyes forever
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun

She broke her stare for a single split second
In a blink she was gone
And again I lost her to the night
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun

I awoke from it all, hot and sticky
I might have cried but I can’t recall
That night is all just a blur to me
It’s like sleeping on the dark side of the sun

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about a dream

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on Jun. 14 2011 at 1:44 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  cAPS lOCK WAS ON AND YOU DIDN'T REALIZE IT?  hahahahaha:)

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:55 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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wOWWW tHIS IS sOOO goOoOd i love the title and the entire piece itself.

on May. 8 2011 at 2:42 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  :):):)

on Mar. 12 2011 at 9:28 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is AMAZING!!!  The meaning travels deep into my soul.  Keep on writing!!!

on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:08 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  It's not my best... But it's very emotional to me.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 5:57 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

awesome. I like the word choice




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