With Hope

December 29, 2010
By SilverBeam BRONZE, IGH, Minnesota
SilverBeam BRONZE, IGH, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Depression isn't enjoyable. It feels as if there's a thousand pound weight on you. You feel like your heart will crack at any moment; so you sit and you pray it won't be in front of the guy that caused it."


In April I dreamed
of when I'd see you again;
the day never came.
And I held out with hope
that when I we'd meet again
you'd remember me.

In August I heard
the words that you said:
"I miss you, beautiful."
And I held out with hope
that when we met again
your feelings were the same.

In October came the day
I been dreaming of for months;
hardly a sentence did we speak.
And I held out with hope
that when I saw you in a week
more words would be said.

In December came the cursed day
the one I'd been dreading:
I'd hoped to keep at bay.
And I held out with hope
that maybe--just maybe--
you'd take back those words.

"I don't care."

The author's comments:
This is a very literal interpretation of a true event in my life; I liked this guy for two years.

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on Nov. 4 2011 at 3:45 pm
QueenNobo SILVER, Port Harcourt, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If at first you don't succeed, try, try, and try again.

Oh...this is so sad. i'm sorry you really experienced this. But you've captured it very well in writing. Good job!

pls could you also check out my work? thanx...:-)





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