Dark Angel

December 11, 2010
By changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
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You’re my dark angel.
I know you, I do.
I know everything.
I can tell you’re not comfortable
Unless imagining something dark.
You like to say things that make my eyes pop.
You don’t let anyone see you smile.
I can’t see inside your soul like others.
I think it’s because it’s so dark.
I know I wouldn’t like to know what you think.
But what do you?
What would I see? Would it horrify me?
I would help, if you would let me.
Please, Dark Angel, I want to help.
I want to help readjust your halo.
And your wings.
Just let me paint them white.
That’s all I ask.
But then, it wouldn’t be the same.
I would miss your weird quirks.
Is that so bad? Is it good?
Is it great to be you, stuck in your own world?
Or is it a Nightmare on Elm Street?
Do you need to be awakened?
I could help.
Let me.



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Megan.J.B said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:28 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

Yeah, that's me I guess, haha. Glad to hear you liked my work, I most certainly enjoyed yours. :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:15 am
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
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OH MY GOSH!!!! YOU'RE THE LOVE LETTERS FROM HELL WRITER!!!! :D :D :D THANKS SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!!!! (kneels on ground in a bow) :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:08 am
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
11 articles 1 photo 22 comments
Thank you. And actually, this is a true article, sadly. Thanks for commenting!! :)

Megan.J.B said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 9:47 am
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

Beautiful piece. :) I really loved the idea and the word choice was wonderful as well. And I do agree about the picture, spot on!

on Jun. 28 2011 at 4:23 am
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
11 articles 1 photo 22 comments
Thank you soo much for commenting! I"m glad you like it! :) And I searched FOREVER to find a perfect pic, and found this, and was soo happy. :) Thanks again!

on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:37 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Wow, this is really nice. I definitely like that wistful quality it has, and the picture completes the image of this poem. It is so beautifully dark, and I love how it sends shivers down my spine. Great job!




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