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You’re my dark angel.
I know you, I do.
I know everything.
I can tell you’re not comfortable
Unless imagining something dark.
You like to say things that make my eyes pop.
You don’t let anyone see you smile.
I can’t see inside your soul like others.
I think it’s because it’s so dark.
I know I wouldn’t like to know what you think.
But what do you?
What would I see? Would it horrify me?
I would help, if you would let me.
Please, Dark Angel, I want to help.
I want to help readjust your halo.
And your wings.
Just let me paint them white.
That’s all I ask.
But then, it wouldn’t be the same.
I would miss your weird quirks.
Is that so bad? Is it good?
Is it great to be you, stuck in your own world?
Or is it a Nightmare on Elm Street?
Do you need to be awakened?
I could help.
Let me.



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Megan.J.BThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 9:47 am
Beautiful piece. :) I really loved the idea and the word choice was wonderful as well. And I do agree about the picture, spot on!
 
changerswriter replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:08 am
Thank you. And actually, this is a true article, sadly. Thanks for commenting!! :)
 
changerswriter replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:15 am
OH MY GOSH!!!! YOU'RE THE LOVE LETTERS FROM HELL WRITER!!!! :D :D :D THANKS SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!!!! (kneels on ground in a bow) :)
 
Megan.J.BThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:28 pm
Yeah, that's me I guess, haha. Glad to hear you liked my work, I most certainly enjoyed yours. :)
 
ExpRESsY0uRse1F said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 3:37 pm
Wow, this is really nice. I definitely like that wistful quality it has, and the picture completes the image of this poem. It is so beautifully dark, and I love how it sends shivers down my spine. Great job!
 
changerswriter replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 4:23 am
Thank you soo much for commenting! I"m glad you like it! :) And I searched FOREVER to find a perfect pic, and found this, and was soo happy. :) Thanks again!
 
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