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Done Deal

By , Commack, NY
And even after the deed was done
You kept thinking to yourself, what have you begun?
But the question really is, what have you become?
Now to fix the whole problem you have to start at step one.

Go back to the day
You life started to sway
Out of control; you have lost your way
It started far back, to the month of May

When the world went crash,
Found out your friends were trash,
Family has run out of cash
That knife went slash

It’s time to start the show
The actions just start to flow
Put on that mask ‘cause there’s nowhere left to go

Back to present time
The bells chime
Tiered of saying “I’m fine”
Waiting for someone to see your life on the line

You know the end is near,
All you have left is fear
When the news is spread and they finally hear
Will people even shed a tear?





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falling10ssupernova said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 4:16 pm
this just made me cry i know exactly how you feel and its sooo horible when no one notices your fake smiles and then you start to wonder if its that they dont notice or if they dont care and you want to go back to the way things were before but you cant and it sucks if you ever want to talk let me know b/c i really understand what your saying and i love this poem soo good check out my stuff if you get a chance
 
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