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Still

white frothy waves
frozen in time
hovering oft
the dark water,
still.
and the thin clouds
spread o’er the ground
cloaking all life,
beginning to
die.
but do not despair,
there’s life underneath.
at least until
the cold seeps in,
a covenant to all things
dark.
what was once
supple, now brittle,
bitterly, cold.
hard blue eyes stare
without seeing,
dark lashes reflect
what’s inside.
the air chilled;
Still.



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Shahed said...
May 14, 2011 at 11:53 am:
I read it twice, it has more than one meaning, it's very deep and creative. Short but very well written! Good job!
 
OriginalCarbonation replied...
May 14, 2011 at 4:27 pm :
thank you! im glad you see the deeper meanings to it :)
 
Shahed replied...
May 14, 2011 at 10:23 pm :

I rated it again lol! that's how much I like it!

And you're so welcome :) ! I'm glad I do, I try! :)

 
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