January 8, 2011
By Cody Barton BRONZE, Park City, Utah
Cody Barton BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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The 14-year old nerd was watching kids play street ball outside his window,
Wishing he could be good at anything outside of school,
Wishing he could be cool.

His body started to tingle,
His skin turning dark,
His body growing rapidly,
A textbook in his hands slowly melts into a leather Spalding.

His cackey’s shrink into shorts,
The scuffed up moon boots shorten into J’s,
And the mismatched socks become high Nike’s.

His button-up shirt loosens and the pens in his chest pocket form the design of his Brandon Jennings jersey,
His combed hair grows outward and curls into an afro as it turns black,
His once skinny limp body was now covered in muscle.

The author's comments:
I am awesome, i like football and basketball

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This article has 3 comments.

Rayleen_16 said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 6:48 pm
NICE JOB!!!! I like your details...

ellie315 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 3:42 pm
ellie315 GOLD, South Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
"And this, our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." -- William Shakespeare

This is so vivid! I love the personal touches - it seems so real. Good job!

on Jan. 10 2011 at 3:42 pm
writingrocks GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to learn to love yourself before you learn to love others."

I love the vivid description that you give to readers! In a few lines about an average nerd, you describe how he changes. There's a whole story going on. Maybe you could write a full story about it? May you please read my poem,"Learn," and comment on it?


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