My first love... my only love

December 23, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3


I’ll tell you what it was like
When I fell in love
I felt like a conquistador
Finding new land
This close to discovering
The Fountain of Youth
I felt like a bottle of champagne
More bubbles than you could count
It felt like nothing could hurt me
My first love was better than drugs
His hugs—unexplainable
The best around—that’s for sure
Every time I see him smile
My insides still turn over
The butterflies still flutter their wings
And when this guy laughs—
I feel complete
Everything about him—my best friend—
Makes me fall even more in love with him



It’s been a year.
My feelings still ring true.


And his even more so
To him—we’re still just friends.


The author's comments:
I hope you like it... sorry about the sad ending.
Picture explanation.... you guys know how hard it is to find the right picture..... I like this one..... =>

God Bless! ?

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JATBZ GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:54 pm
JATBZ GOLD, Winfield, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
“Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.”
Mark Twain

Well, I don't like the lead in put that in author comments lol. However, I really liked the middle the most with all little puns and similes. The end wasn't too bad. 8.2/10

on Jan. 14 2011 at 2:51 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I would LOVE to leave you a comment on this great poem, but you haven't commented on mine so no. :P

on Jan. 14 2011 at 2:17 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

That was not supposed to be a question mark in the authors note. It was supposed to be a cross. I guess it doesn't recognize that... sorry.




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