The Little Strings

December 24, 2010
By TheLittleString BRONZE, London, Other
TheLittleString BRONZE, London, Other
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

The little strings tied to my limbs,
----Annoy me------so,
Pull that------And I am pushed there,
again? --------,
Keep me hanging ------,
Upon the -,
sliver of thread------,
----false potential?---,
Then again --- so!
Withhold your smile,
-----your tear----,
-----And little look,
Cut - Slice - Sever,
Those -----,
----little strings,
Holding me,
----far above---,
- the heart of darkness,
----watch me-,
Smooth ---- rock,
Surrounds----cool emptiness,
---I fly in ecstasy-,
Down the unknown pit-----------------------------

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on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:53 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

If  Smooth rock,Surrounds cool emptiness was removed I think it would make it a better poem =)

I like it =D


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