Irrecoverable

Fiery flowing in your eyes
Fear taking hold of my heart
What can I do?
All I can do is stare at you
While you hold a shiny piece in your hand
As it flows to me
Hits me with one shot
Slimy, smelly, and red
I knew I was simply dead





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RistyBear(: said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:46 am

Well don't give up hope! Some will respond! :)

 

 
MichaelaRayon said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:17 pm
Thanks, I think no one else likes it. :'( Ugh, back to the drawing board.
 
MichaelaRayon said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 4:20 pm

Por favor (Please), rate this!

Gracias! :D

 
MichaelaRayon replied...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 4:42 pm

and commet if you like this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank You

M.R.

 
RistyBear(: replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 5:42 pm
I like it :D
 
MichaelaRayon replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:24 pm
Thanks, no one else likes this, it seems like I'm giving up hope each day...
 
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