Tell Her You Love Her

December 19, 2010
By EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.


Tell her you love her.
Tell her you need her.
Because, deep down,
she needs to believe you.

Her heart is lonely.
Her mind goes blank.
Without you she's empty.
A porcelain slate.

You hurt her.
You broke her.
But she welcomes you
with open arms.

Afraid, and nervous
For you know you don't
have all her trust.
But you hold her heart.

Her heart screams "yes!"
Her mind argues "no!"
Her thoughts shout stop.
But her eyes say go.

Tell her you love her.
That's all she needs.
Anything for her.
A pain, now at ease...


The author's comments:
This piece was written for a friend of mine who couldn't get the courage to go back to the person she loved.

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 6:39 am
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

Thank you so much. :) Everything panned out in the long run.

dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 6:35 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

that was amazing...great! very beautifully written...amazing word choice! i hope your friend is wid the person she wants to be with :) and keep writing!!!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:58 pm
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

You're welcome. :)

 


on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:32 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

i like this.......

i love this......

i often feel like this.....

thanks for putting words to it


on Mar. 12 2011 at 1:36 pm
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

I would love comments and feedback on my work. :)


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