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Tell Her You Love Her

Tell her you love her.
Tell her you need her.
Because, deep down,
she needs to believe you.

Her heart is lonely.
Her mind goes blank.
Without you she's empty.
A porcelain slate.

You hurt her.
You broke her.
But she welcomes you
with open arms.

Afraid, and nervous
For you know you don't
have all her trust.
But you hold her heart.

Her heart screams "yes!"
Her mind argues "no!"
Her thoughts shout stop.
But her eyes say go.

Tell her you love her.
That's all she needs.
Anything for her.
A pain, now at ease...





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dancestar said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:35 pm
that was amazing...great! very beautifully written...amazing word choice! i hope your friend is wid the person she wants to be with :) and keep writing!!!
 
EyesofBlueFire replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 6:39 am
Thank you so much. :) Everything panned out in the long run.
 
miracles_change_people said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:32 pm

i like this.......

i love this......

i often feel like this.....

thanks for putting words to it

 
EyesofBlueFire replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 4:58 pm

You're welcome. :)

 

 
EyesofBlueFire said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 1:36 pm
I would love comments and feedback on my work. :)
 
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