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dreams will happen

I do nothing all day
except dream of that city far away,
where i'll be
when my dreams come true,
alot of others feel that way too.
hollywood,is where i'm going
i have confidence,
and i know its showing!
i won't be held back,
i can't be stoped,
not until i reach the top.
i'm gonna be famous
the whole world will know my name,
im gonna put all the doutera to shame.

im gonna be rich
and the world will see,
dreams will happen
if you let your
imagination rin free!




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gracegirl29This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 2:40 pm:
Good job! I mean, it wasn't beautiful prose or anything but it was definitely cute and you are going places. the only real mechanical problems i had were when you said "Others feel that way to" sounds better as "Feel this way too" and there was a typo in the end (rin should be run) typos happen but try to make sure you keep them out of the beginning and the end because those are what the reader remembers. good luck on your journey. be blessed!
 
poohbear2014This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 10:25 am :
thank you.... you really helped
 
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