Stuck in time

December 12, 2010
By Keeta BRONZE, Lehigh, Florida
Keeta BRONZE, Lehigh, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the past cant be changed so live in the present.


Mind to the future,
Heart in the past,
I’m stuck in time,
Floating forever,
In a endless void,
Of thought and love,
Never knowing,
What will pass,
Diving into memories,
Soaring toward the future,
Stuck in time,
Forever


The author's comments:
i wrote a shorter version in the 6th grade but never believed that i could write poetry. actually i never believed that my writing was good at all

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S M Wells said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 8:09 pm
Oh dear. I know what you mean. But I didn't diserve any thanks for enjoying your poem. Commenting was just the overflow of my inthuseasim.  

Keeta BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 4:43 pm
Keeta BRONZE, Lehigh, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the past cant be changed so live in the present.

i wanted to see peoples reactions to my writting. my friends, family and teachers all said i am a good writer but for some reason i have never been able to believe in myself and my writting. others say i cant write at all and it is just a waste of my time writting silly little poems. thank you for saying something positive about my poem. it really means something to me. 

on Jan. 8 2011 at 5:20 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Why did you put it on hear if you thought it wasn't good? Anyway I supose that's a stuped question. You aparently want someone to contredict you. And I am going to do just that. Because this is a good poem.


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