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Mind to the future,
Heart in the past,
I’m stuck in time,
Floating forever,
In a endless void,
Of thought and love,
Never knowing,
What will pass,
Diving into memories,
Soaring toward the future,
Stuck in time,
Forever



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SMWells said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:20 pm:
Why did you put it on hear if you thought it wasn't good? Anyway I supose that's a stuped question. You aparently want someone to contredict you. And I am going to do just that. Because this is a good poem.
 
stargirl1215 replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 4:43 pm :
i wanted to see peoples reactions to my writting. my friends, family and teachers all said i am a good writer but for some reason i have never been able to believe in myself and my writting. others say i cant write at all and it is just a waste of my time writting silly little poems. thank you for saying something positive about my poem. it really means something to me. 
 
S M Wells replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 8:09 pm :
Oh dear. I know what you mean. But I didn't diserve any thanks for enjoying your poem. Commenting was just the overflow of my inthuseasim.  
 
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