Floorplan

December 9, 2010
By Siobhan PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
Siobhan PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"'At a certain part in your life. Probably when too much of it has gone by. You will open your eyes and see yourself for who you are. Especially for everything that made you so different from all the awful normals. And you will say to yourself, "But I am this person." And in that statement, that correction, there will be a kind of love.' - Phoebe In Wonderland


The embrace to touch my skin,
to share some wamrth within.

the chills dormant in my mind,
waiting for you to find.

Take the floorplan of my brain.
can you find the source of pain?

Cut off the connection please,
before you're stuck, and also freeze.



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on Jan. 8 2011 at 4:19 pm
MapleSyrup BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." -William Wordworth.
"Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality." -Jules De Gaultier

I've read a lot of your stuff!! You're a stunning writer! Really, all your words are from the heart, and that is the best way to use the tool of words.

on Jan. 8 2011 at 9:29 am
Siobhan PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
20 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"'At a certain part in your life. Probably when too much of it has gone by. You will open your eyes and see yourself for who you are. Especially for everything that made you so different from all the awful normals. And you will say to yourself, "But I am this person." And in that statement, that correction, there will be a kind of love.' - Phoebe In Wonderland

Thank you so much. That means a lot <3 Also thank you for just even taking the time to read and review! 

on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:00 pm
MapleSyrup BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." -William Wordworth.
"Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality." -Jules De Gaultier

This is so hauntingly beautiful. You are amazing at expressing how something like that feels...




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