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Sorry

I'm sorry for what I said. Wish we could just back to before when every thing was easier. Even if it was not what we wanted and you had a girlfriend. It hurt less then, I'm sorry i know its not good enough though to just say sorry after what i do to you. Sorry for that fight for that dreadful day when it all came crashing down. I made a mistake hope you can forgive me but i doubt. After all i did i can see that wound is to deep the damage is done. I can see it written n your face as plain as day. Your still waiting on me to say those words we both want to here. I'm sorry for what i did can we just go back to then. Your friend.





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starstruck15 said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 10:19 am
It's pretty good:) It's a typical "breaking-heart" deal. Maybe try to go a little more in depth? Still like it!
 
daddygirl replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:29 pm
thanks I will tryu that next time
 
starstruck15 replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 12:02 pm
Your Welcome!
 
xx3kay3xx said...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 6:53 pm
I know how you feel. :) It's really good. Check out my stuff, i have a poem just like this one lol
 
daddygirl replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:29 pm

thank you and i will check out your work

 

 
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