Just a Bridge

December 19, 2010
I used to be just a bridge.
A bridge that people walked on;
Stomped all over, shook repeatedly.
Just so they could get what they wanted:
To get to the other side.
I turned into an ugly old thing.
Wood rotted, ropes broken.
But then along you came.
You closed the bridge to others.
You repaired my ropes, replaced my wood.
But now, I can't help but wonder...
Are you going to walk over me too?





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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 2:18 pm
oh wow this is simply beautiful...it shows how lifes all about trust, wondering whose going to hurt you next. wonderful poem:)
 
Shminkanator5000 said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 11:41 am
Loved this! It's also tagged as one of my favorites. I feel like I've read your stuff before, and I imagine I loved it because I could definately relate to this piece. Check out some of my work? Thanks a ton!
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 4:23 pm
Thank you so much!  I'll definately look at some of your work.  And thanks for tagging it as one of your favorites too.  =]
 
justsmileanddance said...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 7:02 pm
love it! i feel this way sometimes. i can tell you put alot of emotion into this. very good!
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 7:47 pm
Thank you! =]
 
xx3kay3xx said...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 6:57 pm
amazing. :) i feel the sameee way right now. Check out my work, its pretty decent. lol
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 7:52 pm

Sure, I'll check out your work.

And thank you. =]

 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 7:54 pm
For some reason, your work wasn't showing up on the screen.  Unless it hasn't been published yet?  Haha I don't know.
 
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