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Painted and beautiful, covering up the beams,
Stands a wall,
All coated and clean.
People observe,
Awing at the beauty emanated,
But never see what’s behind the wall.
Behind the wall, is a steel beam,
Holding the wall up so it can be seen,
But no one compliments that beam,
When it is the one holding up everything.
Holding up the beauty, and the space,
For it is the one who holds true beauty,
Showing the support for another.




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Shminkanator5000 said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 11:28 am:
I absolutely love this poem! I tagged it as one of my favorites! I think it means a lot of things, and its left up to the reader to decide what it means to them. Nice work!
 
MRose911 replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 9:08 pm :
:) :) :) thank you!! i really appreciate your input!
 
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MaddieGrThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 6:12 pm:

Love this :D, though I can't really explain why. It just connects with a buncha stuff I guess, and is like my thoughts but in cohesive sentences instead of the mumbo jumble inside my head :)

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MRose911 replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 9:09 pm :
haha :) I'm glad you can relate :P I will make sure to check out your work! :)
 
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