The Simple End

December 12, 2010
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Blissfull silence,
slowly fading into the dark.
A simple end, the one unseen by us.
It stalks us everyday, silent but always there.
But then, it strikes.
The one thing we used to fear is now what we crave.
Beep, beep, beep, silence.
It's the simple end.
The pain is gone,
the anger is gone,
the saddness, is gone.
With ice in your veins and an empty heart,
its what you wanted for so long.
It's finally here,
your slowly fading away, like the sun, dieying towards night.
We all want that simple end.
but is it the simple end, or a new beggining?

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gracegirl29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 2:23 pm

This is a good start, especially since you're new to writing. The first part was a wee bit redundant, and there was also a spelling problem and the end (dieying) but the end was really powerful. Keep writing, and make sure you read a lot of poetry to help shape your style. Good luck!

~ Kirby

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